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Monday 14 September 2020

1.5 ENGLISH FORMAL PERSUASIVE WRITING

 In this essay, I will be arguing about the importance of having friends over money. In today’s generation, money may seem more valuable than friends but money can't buy you happiness.


 If you chose money over friends your life would be lonely. Yes, money can buy stuff that can make you happy but it can only provide us with temporary happiness through materialistic things whereas with friends they can show you all their love and support and how much they care for you and how to have fun without the use of money.

 If you are wise enough to know the worth between money and friends you should be able to make the right decisions on which one is worth more in life.  


If you have no money you can always ask your friends to borrow some money from them and you could just pay them back later on. What if you run out of money? You won’t have anything left to live for because you decided to choose money over friends. For instance, with friends, you lose some and you gain some that are just part of the reality of life.  Some people do prefer to be alone for the rest of their life, therefore, it’ll be easy for them to choose money over friends, but if you choose money over friends just because you want to and how it could benefit temporarily then you’re just choosing that choice out of satisfaction.


 Having money on you won’t always make you happy and won’t help with the needs of your mental and emotional well being. In fact, money can help you in some type of way to deal with your mental and emotional well being but it will only be temporary, whereas with friends it can be permanent because they’re the ones that can you help you with whatever especially the friends that you are really close with, you will be able to open up to them tell them about your thoughts and feelings and how your day went instead of keeping it all bottled up in your head and having to keep your thoughts to yourself. But if you open up to your friends they can help you in many ways and they actually care about your thoughts and feelings.  


To conclude in this essay I’m more likely to survive with friends by my side rather than money.


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